Religion in the Fake Land: Duo of Loners Written and Created by Vember Judgement Pg1 (*Pgs 1-6 take place on a scorched earth; A battlefield) Panel 1: A full 'Above them all' frontal shot of an army of about ten Fox, Wolf and Rabbit-Born soldiers, whom are all fearfully looking up at someone. Many of them have their weapons drawn. There seems to be a lot of wind, and there is a shadow looming over them. Panel 2: Angled shot of the person hovering over them (Rčal). She is being held in the air by wintry gusts. Her arms are out to her sides in a menacing gesture, the cursed shroud of a BlackNun hanging off her skinny frame. The hood covers her face halfway, only her RabbitBorn nose and mouth is seen. She isn't smiling. The bright red-yellow sun shines brightly behind her. Panel 3: An upper bodied shot of two soldiers stepping forward. One (A Rabbit-Born) holds out a jagged dagger shard, while the other (A Fox-Born) holds onto a pistol-like device with both hands. They look very scared as the cold wind gusts blow through their hair. Fox Soldier: We can kill her if we are not afraid. She's new and inexperienced. Rabbit Soldier: But she's a BlackNun...Why would our lord send a comrade against us? Fox Soldier: To test our strength. Besting her will bring us much honor. Panel 4: A frontal shot of the Fox Soldier raising his pistol in the air and roaring out a battle cry. Fox Soldier: Our god Mobus has sent this BlackNun to test our worthiness! We must show our strength in the glory of His flames!!! Panel 5: A forward cinematic shot of the soldiers running forward. Soldiers in unison: For the right to Evil!!! Panel 6: A cinematic shot of two shadowed, crazed eyes peering out in hunger. Pg2 Panel 1: A quick shot of piercing wind gusts shooting through flesh. Panel 2: A horror shot of two soldiers falling to the ground, clutching to the many holes in their chests. The wounds are very clean. Panel 3: An action shot of a wolf-born soldier swinging his longblade at Rčal. She has her hands out as to catch something. Panel 4: A quick shot of his longblade shattering against a sudden cushion of wind that covered Rčal's hands. It shatters like ice. Panel 5: A far shot of Rčal suddenly decapitating the soldier with a wind gust, as the Fox-Born from Pg1, Panel 3 wields his pistol device in the foreground. He is pointing it in Rčal's direction. Fox Soldier: One shot to end the slaughter... Pg3 Panel 1: A grand forward action shot of the Fox Soldier shooting out a gigantic red rimmed orange energy blast from his pistol device. It fires out like a stream of water. Fox Soldier: To the Depths!!! Panel 2: A shot of the blast hitting Rčal full blast. It hits her square in the chest, causing her to jerk forward and inverted. Panel 3: A shot of Rčal limply floating face down. The fall looks very graceful. Panel 4: A full shot of the remaining soldiers jumping in the air in joy. Panel 5: An upper bodied forward shot of the Fox Soldier screaming out to the others in glee, unaware that Rčal is floating towards him looking strait ahead. Fox Soldier: We've shown our strength to Mobus!!! Pg4 Panel 1: A full-bodied shot of Rčal hovering at an angle behind the Fox Soldier, patting the top of his head. At the same time she has her face to his left ear whispering into it. Her body shines like ice melting in the sun. The Fox Soldier's eyes flash strangely. Panel 2: A shadowed facial shot of Snowpowder whispering into his ear. Rčal: (WHISPER) Panel 3: A shot of what is left of the army looking on in shock. Panel 4: An angled upper bodied shot of the Fox Soldier holding onto the pistol-like weapon with both his hands, pointing it up to his face. He cracks a forced smile. Rčal floats above him like a reaper waiting for a coming soul to take. Panel 5: A panoramic shot of blood splattering across Rčal's lips. The flash of the gun suicide reveals a good portion of her face. She has a blank look on. Pg5 Panel 1: A detailed full body shot of Rčal standing over the headless body, winds blowing around her. Her body still shimmers very brightly. Rčal: You are all your own enemy. Execute yourselves. Panel 2: A quick shot of a dagger piercing flesh Panel 3: A cinematic shot of some solders struggling to not kill themselves with their weapons. They all have very haunting smiles on their faces, their eyes glowing. In the foreground, a soldier who stabbed himself with his dagger writhes on his knees. Rčal (off-panel): Yes...That is the proper way to do it... Panel 4: A shot of one solder running away, not being affected by what Rčal is doing to the others. It's the Rabbit Soldier from Pg1, Panel 3. Pg6 Panel 1: An upper bodied side shot of the Rabbit Soldier. He has a terrible fear in his eyes. Rabbit Soldier(Thinking): We were so unworthy...So unworthy... Panel 2: Similar to the last panel, only the soldier stops abruptly. Rčal has appeared in front of him. Panel 3: Horror-like shot of Rčal cocking her head to one side childishly. Her hood hangs over the upper portions of her face at an angle. Rčal: You're not allowed to run away. Panel 4: An action side shot of Rčal reaching out for the soldier's head. Panel 5: A quick facial shot of the soldier screaming. The shadow of Rčal's hand covers his face. Pg7 (*Pgs 7-8 take place in on a tree covered forest plane. Sunlight beams down here and there) Panel 1: An extreme upper-bodied action shot of a FoxBorn (Ranryo), grasping at his head. Horrible screams are reverberating inside his skull. Ranryo: Ngh!!! (I know, I know...Common comic hurting sound, right?---CJ) Panel 2: An angled shot of Ranryo falling to his knees behind someone's legs (Quoin). Ranryo: Rčal...She has transformed yet again... Panel 3: A behind the back shot of Quoin looking over his shoulder. He has his leather blindfold on. Quoin: I can feel the pain radiate from your body Ranryo...How many is she killing-? Ranryo (off-panel): Ten soldiers...Mobus soldiers...A slaughter... Panel 4: A side shot of Ranryo grabbing at Quoin's trenchcoat. He hold's his own forehead in the other. Ranryo: Their screams are in my head Quoin...And it hurts... Panel 5: Forward facial shot of Quoin with his head lowered in a sadness. Quoin: ... Pg8 Panel 1: Great full-bodied side shot of Quoin and Ranryo, with the forest surrounding them. Quoin still has his head down, and Ranryo is still on his knees grasping at his trench. Panel 2: A Quoin perspective shot of his unusually large gloved right hand. It's opened, and Quoin is looking down at it. Panel 3: A quick close-up of one of the fingers. There seems to be a cat-like claw ripping through the top of the glove. Panel 4: A shot similar to Pg7, Panel 4, only Ranryo's grip loosens as Quoin walks away. Quoin: Her murdering doesn't change our course of action. We still have to intercept Onn at the designated place and time. Ranryo: And if he can't capture her in her current state? Would we have to confront her? Panel 5: A side shot of Quoin's gloved right hand. His retractable claws suddenly rip through the glove. Quoin: One way or another...We end her suffering tonight. Pg9 (*Pgs 9-24 take place back on the battlefield) Panel 1: A quick shot underneath a wheel cart. The wheels are moving along. Panel 2: A great illustration of Rčal kneeling in a wheel cart pulley, bound and chained to it.. The carmine moon is brilliant in the background, partially fading down in the horizon (To signify that some time has passed since her slaughter earlier). Following suit is the bright red-yellow sun, seemingly dwarfed next to the carmine moon. It is beginning to set behind the moon. Panel 3: A side shot of two legs that seem to struggle along a scorched wagon trail. Two MouseBorn (Onn, Jewl) are pulling the wheel cart. Their tails can be seen behind their legs. Pg10 Panel 1: A frontal shot of them pulling the wheel cart with ropes. Onn stares over at Jewl with a smirk. She looks tired. Onn: Now don't tell me you're already tired Jewl...We've barely been at this. Jewl: (Whimper) Let's stop for a while okay? My feet hurt... Onn: No, we half to- Jewl: (Whimper) Onn, please??? P-L-E-A-S-E!?! Panel 2: A facial shot of Onn, giving up his fight to go on. Onn: (SIGH) Alright, alright...We can rest for a short time. Panel 3: A somewhat far shot of them all stopping. They both toss their ropes down. Jewl: Finally, REST!!! My feet feel like they're broken! Onn: You're such a damned baby... Panel 4: A somewhat comical shot of Jewl sitting down on the ground while reaching for her feet. Jewl: Why'd I get stuck do'n this grunt work anyway? I'm an assassin, not a kidnapper! Panel 5: A shot of Onn pulling out a blade from his coat with his right hand while leaning against the pulley. He stares at Rčal. Onn: It's that attitude that got you this job. You're not above this sort of work and you know it. Pg11 Panel 1: A shot of Jewl laying on her side, oblivious to the fact she is laying on the dirty ground. She is yawning. Jewl: But kidnapping is so boring. B-O-R-I-N-G!!! I'd rather be hunting a monster, not babysitting it. Panel 2: A upper bodied shot of Onn swinging his blade limply to crack his right wrist. Onn: And I'd rather that the baby I'm sitting wouldn't complain so much about her duties.   Jewl (off panel): Hey! That's not funny... Panel 3: A sudden facial shot of Rčal speaking. Rčal: It hurts... Panel 4: Full-bodied shot of Onn reacting to Rčal speaking. Jewl sits up in attention in the background. Rčal: Onn... Jewl: Hey! It can talk! Onn: Well of course she can. BlackNuns aren't mute. What did you think? Panel 5: A facial shot of Jewl rolling her eyes. Jewl: How'm I supposed to know? I never met one A-L-I-V-E before. Pg12 Panel 1: A shot of Rčal looking off opposite of Jewl and Onn. She seems to notice something far off. Jewl: And what do ya mean 'SHE'? You know it or something? Onn: She's the bride to be of a comrade of mine. The Order of Mobus changed her to this...travesty. Panel 2: A close shot of Onn reaching out for Rčal's chin with one hand while putting away his blade. His movements are slow. Onn: Her name is Rčal. She was the Royal WaterBringer of the defunct Ambian Monarchy. Panel 3: A shot of Onn grasping at her chin. Onn: She was enslaved after the Mobus army murdered the monarchs she worked for. Panel 4: A shot of Jewl kneeling up at attention, reacting to Onn grabbing at Rčal's face. Jewl: What the E-V-I-L are you do'n touching her!?! You did notice all those dead Mobus soldiers back there, right? Panel 5: A close side shot of Onn pressing Rčal's face up. Her shroud is falling back. Pg13 Panel 1: A 'Onn' perspective of Rčal's face. He looks down at her as she stares right back. She's incredibly stunning except for her eyes, which are opened in a horrific glare. The blood on her face from earlier has dried. Rčal: Did I do... terrible things again? Panel 2: A shot of Jewl holding out her arms to make a point. Jewl: You slaughtered those soldiers! Dead-Killed them-D-E-A-D! Don't you remember, or are you pulling a 'I don't remember' trick'? Panel 3: Quick dreamy shot back in time of one of the soldiers she murdered. His mouth is open in a frozen horror. There are many scratches and cuts on his face. Panel 4: A shot of Rčal's face, as she begins to tear. Rčal: I...I do remember...But... Pg14 (Dream-like sequences) Panel 1: Morbidly beautiful shot of the aftermath of what she did earlier. Rčal is kneeling on the ground, as all the soldiers around her are still. Some are mutilated by her while others have their self-made wounds. The last soldier is the RabbitBorn soldier. He is resting his head like a child would on Rčal's lap. She is stroking his hair like a mother would. Panel 2: A side shot of the soldier's expression. It's one of pure terror. Fox Soldier: Unworthy... Panel 3: A shot of Snowpowder pulling away from his hair and reaching for his throat. Rčal: You're up past your bedtime again...What a very naughty boy you are. Panel 4: A facial shot of Rčal as she is smiling, totally distanced from what she is doing. The sickening snap of the Fox Soldier's throat rings in the background. She giggles like a child would after the telling of a funny joke. Rčal: (Giggle) Panel 5: An angled and dramatic 'Behind the back' shot of Rčal giggling uncontrollably. Pg15 Panel 1: A shot of Rčal screaming up in horror, tears streaming down her eyes. Rčal: I didn't mean to kill them! I didn't mean to!!! Panel 2: A shot of Onn holding onto Rčal's head as she cries into his chest. Onn: Shhh, don't cry. We're here to help you away from this new life... Rčal: (Sobbing). Jewl (In  the background): I'm not here to S-A-V-E her... Panel 3: A detailed shot of Rčal sobbing in Onn's chest. Rčal: I didn't. I really didn't... Panel 4: A cinematic shot of Jewl looking off at something with alarm. In the background Onn is still comforting Rčal. Jewl: Hey Onn! I see people coming! They're heading here pretty F-A-S-T! Panel 5: A shot of Onn looking on in wonder. Rčal is still sobbing. Onn: Could be Quoin and Ranryo...No! Pg16 Panel 1: A cinematic shot of three figures in the background. They are blurred by the sun setting behind them. Panel 2: A close-up of the three figures- Two WolfBorn and a FoxBorn; Mobus soldiers. They look extremely pissed and ready to kill. Panel 3: An action shot of Onn pulling out his blade in anger. Rčal pulls away. Onn: Mobus Soldiers! Outsider Troops! Panel 4: A shot of a suddenly happy Jewl. She's cracking her knuckles in anticipation. Jewl: Man, elite Mobus soldiers! F-U-N time! Panel 5: A close up of Jewl's hands as she is cracking them. They are suddenly on fire, but the flames are not burning her sleeves. Pg17 Panel 1: A grim shot of Rčal looking away, knowing full well what is going on. She is smiling uncontrollably, surges of her evil side coming back. Rčal: They've come to give me punishment again...(Giggle) Panel 2: A cinematic shot of the three soldiers stopping in front of Jewl and the others. The three soldiers all have very long swords suddenly pulled out. Wolf Soldier 1: Heathen MouseBorn! We saw you kidnap her from afar! Wolf Soldier 2: That is a BlackNun of the Order of Mobus! She must be given to us immediately for punishment! Fox Soldier: Punishment for the deaths of fellow soldiers! Panel 3: Upper-bodied shot of Onn protectively in front of Rčal. Onn: Forget it! I've heard of the lecherous punishments the Mobus armies impose on BlackNuns! Panel 4: A close-up of Onn's face as it contorts with rage. Onn: You know what you have to try to get her away from us... Panel 5: An action shot of Wolf Soldier 1 lunging forward with his blade. Wolf Soldier 1: For the Glory of His- Pg18 Panel 1: A glorious action shot of Jewl plowing both her fists into Wolf Soldier 1's chest. Her hands burst like mini novas. The soldier doesn't even have the chance to react to the blow. Jewl has a normal look on her face, as if she were effortlessly flicking on a light switch. Panel 2: A shot of the soldier falling at the feet of the two other soldiers. The Wolf Soldier has an enormous singe mark on his chest, and the look on his face in death is one of a wide-eyed shock. Two Soldiers: !!! Panel 3: A full-bodied shot of Jewl standing as if she were about to curtsy. Her hands are bright with a spiritual fire. Jewl: Don't look shocked. Althemontis IS my F-A-T-H-E-R. Panel 4: A quick shot of the Fox soldier suddenly enraged. He is in the process of throwing his sword. Fox Soldier: Daughter to the heathen leader of the Peacetime!?! Panel 5: A quick action shot of the Fox Soldier's sword heading strait for Jewl's face. She looks on innocently. Pg19 Panel 1: A great shot of Jewl swatting away the sword effortlessly. Jewl: Come on guys, you're supposed to be elite soldiers. Throwing a sword is- Panel 2: A quick upper-bodied shot of the Fox Soldier appearing suddenly behind Jewl. She looks behind herself with wonder. Jewl: E-A- Panel 3: A nice facial shot of Jewl looking forward, as the wolf soldier suddenly appears in front of her. He looks right into her eyes. Jewl: S-Y... Panel 4: A quick shot of Onn screaming out in anger. Onn: Jewl, they're going to- Panel 5: A quick shot of the Fox Soldier suddenly grasping onto Jewl's left shoulder with his free hand. Panel 6: A quick shot of the Wolf Soldier grasping onto Jewl's right shoulder with his. Pg20 Panel 1: A glorious action shot of a fiery energy surging right into Jewl from the two soldiers, a column of fire around them. She screams up in complete pain. Soldiers in Unison: Heart of Mobus!!! Jewl:!!! Panel 2: A shot of Jewl collapsing between the soldiers, apparently dead (She isn't of course). Panel 3: A shot of the two soldiers looking dead on at Onn (umm...No pun intended **^_^**) Panel 4: A quick action shot of the two soldiers rushing forward. Soldiers: For Mobus! Panel 5: A frantic shot of Onn getting ready to be attacked by the soldiers. He has his free hand back to hold onto Rčal. Panel 6: A quick shot of a crack zigzagging across the scorched battleground. Pg21 Panel 1: A great shot of the Soldiers suddenly stopping and coming face to face with Quoin. He looks down at them with his cat hand drawn and clawed. They look up at him with surprise. The ground around them is apparently shaking from a minor earthquake. Panel 2: A nasty action shot of Quoin clawing the Wolf Soldier in the face, practically tearing it off. The Fox Soldier defends himself to the left. Panel 3: An action shot of Quoin immediately knocking the other soldier clear away with a powerful kick. Panel 4: A quick action shot of the Fox Soldier sliding across the ground on his back violently. Panel 5: A quick shot of the soldier stopping. The panel is set in such an angle that the reader can tell he was kicked pretty far from Quoin. Panel 6: A quick facial shot of the soldier looking on with a horrific look on his face. Fox Soldier: Quoin! The hand of the Unknown!!! Pg22 Panel 1: A quick shot of the soldier turning tail. Panel 2: A side shot of Onn and Ranryo running past Quoin to Jewl's aid, both worried. Their running is stumbled by the earthquake. Quoin is walking in the opposite direction, heading for Rčal. His movements are methodic and gothic-like, despite the shaking ground. Onn: Jewl! Panel 3: A shot of Ranryo and Onn kneeling down to help up Jewl. She has one eye open and has a facial expression of pain. Other than her clothing being a bit singed, she is okay. Onn: Jewl you overconfident brat! You scared me! Jewl: Calm D-O-W-N...They just caught me of guard... Onn You're ALWAYS getting caught off guard! Panel 4: A great far and cinematic shot of Quoin standing near Rčal. The ground between them is swallowing up into a large crack in the earth. They look at each other with their heads down. Panel 5: A great shot of Rčal suddenly screaming out passionately. Rčal: Quoin! Come and kiss me, please! I'm going insane! Pg23 Panel 1: A shot of Onn, Jewl and Ranryo trying to keep their footing while holding up the injured Jewl. Ranryo and Onn are calling out to prevent the kiss. Ranryo: Quoin, you're too near her! The ground is becoming unstable! Onn: You're causing the earth to shake from it's hinges! Panel 2: A quick shot of Quoin screaming back at everyone angrily. Quoin: I don't care if the world splits in half! Run away from the destruction until I exorcise the evil from her body! Panel 3: A shot of Onn, Ranryo and Jewl looking at each other. Ranryo: Do as he asks. Let's escape before we die in this earthquake. Jewl, Yes, can we? Panel 4: A quick shot of the three of the running off. Panel 5: A shot of some chains falling down to the ground (The chains that bound Rčal the wheel cart). Pg24 Panel 1: A great shot of Quoin holding Rčal in his arms, the ground around them cracking. She cuddles close to him, the remainder of the chains hanging off her body. Panel 2: A great close shot of them looking at each other, on approach to the impending kiss. Rčal: I've done so many bad things Quoin... Quoin: You won't do them again. Panel 3: A nice close shot of the two of them kissing. Panel 4: A grand final shot of the two passionately kissing, even with the ground around them suffering from a 6.5 quake. They seem unaffected, even with the F.2 tornado's in the background (three of them). There also seems to be a light red carmine glow around them. The sun is setting brilliantly behind them, as they continue to kiss like if it was their last. Pg25 (Setting takes place on an open field near a large forest. The Gypsy Cabal has set up camp in this field, are there are close to fifty different wagons and hover chariots here and there.)   Panel 1: A grand shot of the Gypsy Cabal base camp, the carmine moon is brilliant in the night sky. Unlike our planet there isn't many stars up in that sky. Also unlike our planet, the atmosphere has a slight reddish hue (from the carmine moon's glow). Panel 2: An angled side shot of one chariot in particular in the outskirts of the Gypsy base camp. It is completely black, the only one in the whole camp that is. On the side that is shown is a small window with 12 small bars running vertically across it. Panel 3: A quick shot behind the bars inside the chariot. The carmine moon's reddish light sickly shines through them. Pg26 Panel 1: A great inside shot of the trailer. Except for a small cot near the barred window, it is void of anything. Lying sideways on the cot is Rčal, who has a large chain wrapped around her body. Her hands are also wrapped with chains, only they are very small ones. Panel 2: A facial shot of Rčal with her face turned towards the direction opposite the window. She has been crying for the last few minutes, the tears running down her face and onto the cot beginning to dry. She looks sad, but not really expressive. Rčal: Quoin...Are you still out there? Panel 3: A frontal shot of Quoin standing a few yards away from the trailer. He's wrapping up his cat hand tightly with red cloth. He looks a little angry. Panel 4: A quick shot of Quoin tightening a final knot with his teeth. Rčal (off panel): Quoin? Panel 5: An angled facial shot of Quoin looking over at the chariot slightly. Quoin: I'm here. Just taking a second to wrap up my hand. Pg27 Panel 1: A shot of Rčal trying to rise out of the cot. She's heading to peak out of the window. Rčal: Do...do you really think the leader of the Gypsy Cabal will help us? Panel 2: A full-bodied side shot of Quoin facing the chariot. Rčal is looking through the bars. Quoin: Triune has to. She wouldn't want to lose her only protection. Rčal: You're...going to FORCE her to help? Quoin: If it means we can be together again and live a normal life...Yes. Panel 3: A great side shot of Rčal looking out the window, trying hard to grab onto the bars of the window. Rčal: She might want to kill me... Quoin (off panel): Nonsense. Rčal: Seriously! She doesn't see me as you do. She sees me as I am...A murderous BlackNun. Quoin: Don't talk like that! You're not a monster... Panel 4: A close frontal facial shot of Rčal looking out of the window. Rčal: Quoin...No matter how you see me, I'm what I've been made to be. Until the evil inside of me can be healed...and the curse that keeps us apart is dead... Panel 5: A great shadowed side shot of Rčal, looking defeated. Rčal (off panel): I'll be a monster to everyone around me. Pg28 Panel 1: An upper bodied shot of Quoin looking down at the ground angrily as Onn and Jewl head in his direction. Onn is holding a black cigarette in his right hand. Jewl is bandaged up from her encounter in the last issue. She looks to be in pain. Jewl: Quoin, Triune told us to come tell you she's ready to talk. Um...You okay? Quoin: ...An unusually stupid question coming from you Jewl. Onn: Such a wounded soul. Attitude and all. Quoin: If you're here to protect Rčal, do a good job. Please. Panel 2: A shot of Onn smoking his cigarette. Onn: Don't worry about Rčal. (Puffs his cigarette) We're here to baby-sit. Panel 3: A shot of Quoin and Onn/Jewl passing each other, Onn and Jewl head towards the chariot, Quoin heading toward Triune's chariot. Panel 4: A shot of Rčal looking down at Onn and Jewl from the trailer. Onn looks up at her, smoking his cig. Jewl looks on pissed. Onn: It's a shame Triune has you locked up like this. One would think that a person deserves a little comfort after going through the ordeal you did. Panel 5: A quick shot of Onn offering up his cig. Onn: You'll be free soon though, I'm sure...Want to blow smoke in the meantime? Pg29 (The next few pages mostly take place in the throne room of The Ventricle, the huge home castle/war tank of the Order of Mobus. It's about 17 kilometers from the Gypsies current position. It has been set up next to a huge mountain.) Panel 1: A grand full-sized shot of The Ventricle. The many lights inside and out of the huge castle tank light up the entire panel.    Caption: The Ventricle. Home Castle and Battle Tank of the Order of Mobus. Panel 2: An angled  shot of a long elegant hallway. Drapes of fabric hang everywhere like cobwebs.   Pg30 Panel 1: An angled shot of the end of the hallway, where there is a huge throne room. In the middle of the room is the huge and elegant throne, turned opposite away from the hallway. The top of the throne touches the high ceiling. Panel 2: A facial side close up of Korrozia, who seems to be eating something juicy with blood. Her mouth is off-panel, but the entire area around it is dripping with blood. Splatters of it are on her face. Panel 3: A shot of a female soldier of Mobus running down the hallway with certain urgency. Panel 4: A forward shot of the female soldier kneeling down behind the throne. At the left side of the panel Korrozia picks her head up from her meal and looks to her right. Blood streams down her mouth. Female Soldier: Mistress Korrozia, our sources have told us our newest BlackNun has been captured and detained by the Gypsies. The soldiers wish to know if a tactical rescue is in order. Panel 5: A horror shot of a body suddenly slumping to the side of the throne. The Fox Soldier who escaped from Issue One. His throat looks to have been gnawed on by Korrozia. Disgusting how some animals eat their pray ^_-. Pgpg31 Panel 1: A grand full-bodied shot of Korrozia, looking tall and elegant despite the drying blood on her face and gown. She looks on with deadly intent. Korrozia: I requested to be alone for the night. No one, god or beast, deserves to disturb a moment of my quiet time.   Panel 2: A shot of the soldier looking on in absolute fear. She holds her hands forward in a pleading gesture. Soldier: Mistress, I'm sorry, but I was sent by Ančthes himself and- Panel 3: A quick action shot of Korrozia thrusting her fore and middle fingers through the soldier's forehead. Blood splatters everywhere. Panel 4: A horror shot of Korrozia's face, as it contorts into a disgusting mess of anger and animalistic joy. Korrozia: You were sent by Ančthes to be my next meal! Pg32 Panel 1: An angled shot of the hallway leading to the throne room. Leaning up against one side of it are Vainia and Lunisa, both are partially in mist form from their crimson cloaks. Panel 2: A close up of Vainia and Lunisa as they watch in horror at what Korrozia just did. Lunisa is crying from the horror, while Vainia looks on in a blank horror. They both whisper to each other. Lunisa: How...How can such an elegantly dressed woman be such a monster... Vainia: Evil has no dress code...You should know that. Panel 3: A shadowed side cinematic shot of Korrozia holding up the soldier's corpse by her fore and middle finger. Lunisa: What are we going to do now Vainia? Should we slay her, because I- Vainia: Be silent, child. I promised someone else that privilege. We leave now, report to our superiors. Panel 4: A cinematic shot of Lunisa and Vainia sneaking away, while a shadowed Korrozia begins to suck out the brain matter of the dead female soldier. Lunisa: But we have such a chance to slay her. Why don't we- Vainia: Hush now! I didn't intend to die in this sacrilegious monstrosity of a castle. It would be best to just go back and prepare for war. Panel 5: A close up shot of Lunisa looking back at Korrozia. She's so hot for her, it's ridiculous. The reader will mistake her expression as being one of anger. Pg33 (The next few pages take place inside the main war wagon of the Gypsies. It's also the grave of Trio, founder of the Gypsy Cabal.) Panel 1: A grand shot of the main war wagon of the Gypsy Cabal. The lights in and out of the wagon are surprisingly bright. About five soldiers stand guard around it, standing in the typical 'wall' stance. Panel 2: A quick frontal shot of Triune's head. She is just looking strait ahead, extremely angry. Panel 3: A half-bodied shot of Quoin standing in the doorway of Trio's display room. It's the room his body is displayed. Quoin stands there firmly as usual. Quoin: Triune, I'm here. What do you want? Panel 4: A close side shot of Triune kneeling on the ground, holding her hands up in prayer. Instead of clasping her hands, she is holding her sacred dagger, Hope. She's praying up to her brother. Triune: ...Quoin. Panel 5: A close shot of Triune holding her sacred dagger. Triune: ...Don't just stand there. Show your proper respect in my brother's presence. Pg34 Panel 1: A great angled, detailed shot of Triune praying up to her brother's casket, which is hung from the ceiling. There are wildflowers littered everywhere, hung on the walls, sprawled on the ground, everywhere. Panel 2: A forward shot of Quoin kneeling down next to Triune, clasping his hands in prayer. Pg35 Panel 1: A shot of Triune looking over at Quoin angrily while his closes his eyes in prayer. Triune: You compromised my entire family by bringing your monster. I should have the both of you hung. Quoin: Empty talk.  It's not in your nature to threaten. Besides, you'll know what I'll do if you dare hurt Rčal. Panel 2: A sudden angled action shot of Triune shoving Hope into Quoin's stomach.    Triune: Don't talk down to me like that! Panel 3: A close shot of Triune stabbing Quoin again. He tries his best to stop her, but a fury burns within her. Panel 4: A full-bodied side shot of Triune standing up and looking down at Quoin, pissed as Hell. Quoin holds his stomach in pain while laying back and looking up at Triune. Triune: I saved your life and you talk to me like that! And in front of my brother! Quoin: Triune... Panel 5: A shot of Triune wanting to drive her dagger down. Triune: Since I saved your life,  I can take it away too! Pg36 Panel 1: A forward shot of Quoin crawling back towards the doorway. At that moment, Triplet walking into the room with a pitcher of juice. She looks in very happily, unaware of what's going on. Panel 2: A upper bodied shot of Triplet looking really cute while holding up the pitcher. Triplet: Triune, I brought some fresh juice for you! **^_^** Panel 3: A quick shot of the pitcher shattering on the ground. Panel 4: A great action shot of Triplet holding back Triune. Triune almost stabs Quoin in the heart. He looks on blankly. Triplet: Triune, what are you doing!?! Triune: ... Panel 5: An angled shot of Triplet looking into Triune's angry face. Triplet: Get a hold of yourself sister...Did Quoin do something so bad that you want to kill him? Triune: By him bringing his monster... He's jeopardized our family's safety... Triplet: So what if he brought a BlackNun, it's no different than when a captured soldier is brought in by us. Triune: ... Pg37 Panel 1: A shot of Triune standing up, looking at Quoin's blood on her dagger. She has a remorseful look on her face. Panel 2: A shot of Triune walking past Triplet and Quoin. She doesn't look at either of them. Triplet: Aren't you going to heal him? He'll die if you don't. Panel 3: A quick shot of Triune holding her right hand behind herself, shooting out a dim blue ball of energy from the palm. Panel 4: A shot of the energy ball hitting Quoin gently against his stomach wounds. Triplet grabs onto his shoulders affectionately. Panel 5: A shot of the wounds instantly healing Pg38 Panel 1: A shot of Ranryo walking into the room with urgency. Triune walks past him, practically bumping him out of he path. Ranryo: Triune, what happened here? Triune: Leave me alone. Panel 2: A shot of Quoin getting up while Triplet and Ranryo tend to him. Triplet: My sister's been really stressed while you both were away. The responsibility of being leader is getting to her. Panel 3: A shot of Quoin looking over at Triplet. Triplet has a really worried look on her face. Triplet: ...Things lately just seem to worsen more and more. The Order of Mobus are winning the war, and here we all are practically fighting each other... Quoin: ... Panel 4: A side shot of Quoin suddenly holding onto Triplet's hands. Quoin: A face so accustomed to being happy shouldn't look that way. Don't worry, things will go for the better. Triplet: Really? Panel 5: A shot of Quoin leading Triplet to the door. Quoin: Your sister needs you now. Go to her (Unfinished)